Although u consider these as rough depictions of ur 3 acts I think these frames are successful because you can tell what u want to happen in each act of ur story.
I really like ur last act with ur fridge still, leaving poor Wayne to explain everything as his date arrives This is good so far :)
Thanks Adam! Did you notice Wayne is naked on the last frame? After Phil's feedback it turned out the ending will be better that way. When the girlfriend arrives home she sees him half naked covered in chocolate(or something similar) so she thinks he planned a 'different' evening other than a romantic one :P
Although u consider these as rough depictions of ur 3 acts I think these frames are successful because you can tell what u want to happen in each act of ur story.
ReplyDeleteI really like ur last act with ur fridge still, leaving poor Wayne to explain everything as his date arrives
This is good so far :)
Thanks Adam! Did you notice Wayne is naked on the last frame? After Phil's feedback it turned out the ending will be better that way. When the girlfriend arrives home she sees him half naked covered in chocolate(or something similar) so she thinks he planned a 'different' evening other than a romantic one :P
ReplyDeleteYes I had noticed and I agree this ending is better for adding strength to the resolution act I also like Wayne's panicked expression :)
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