it just seems to me that things just need to be taken more slowly; for example, I don't think your audience will be able to read the book title for themselves; there will be a simple visual pleasure in seeing your world 'pop-up' so don't be afraid to let your audience enjoy it 'happening'. Lots of potential here, Andriana; you've got something really cute on the go here, so keep at it, and don't settle until it's right. Good luck and keep the pre-viz coming.
it just seems to me that things just need to be taken more slowly; for example, I don't think your audience will be able to read the book title for themselves; there will be a simple visual pleasure in seeing your world 'pop-up' so don't be afraid to let your audience enjoy it 'happening'. Lots of potential here, Andriana; you've got something really cute on the go here, so keep at it, and don't settle until it's right. Good luck and keep the pre-viz coming.
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