I used my own ink splatters this time for the trees and added a foreground to give it a bit more depth. A bit more detail on the house and I will be done with my first piece I thonk. (phew!)
a HUGE leap forward, Andriana - those trees bring the whole composition to gothic life. Just sort those windows now - get rid of the yellow - you've actually got a monochromatic palette - black/grey/silver - those yellow windows seem so 2d and 'off message' to me - they lack the grace and detail of everything else you've accomplished - so be brave, Andriana - again. Those windows are just not working!
a HUGE leap forward, Andriana - those trees bring the whole composition to gothic life. Just sort those windows now - get rid of the yellow - you've actually got a monochromatic palette - black/grey/silver - those yellow windows seem so 2d and 'off message' to me - they lack the grace and detail of everything else you've accomplished - so be brave, Andriana - again. Those windows are just not working!
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