I am not sure about this pose. It looks boring to me so I might have to redraw him. I don't think he is directly distinguished as the villain in the all 3 pose. EEeek what to do ....
Hey Andi, it's going to take a bit of courage and endurance to revisit your villain - but I think you should. Part of the issue is that his crystalised arm - which is the defining feature of him - looks passive - like a total dead-weight, and if it had some animation to it, just something to make it feel as if it belongs to the character more?
Maybe more emphasis on the villain as well because you have done a great job with the hero and sidekick but your villain is not quite there enough compared to the other two
Maybe a more sinister expression or as Phil suggested more life in the crystalised arm showing off a bit of power
However I think your close just refine the villain further and I think you will have three successful characters
I think the villains pose does need some work. The emphasis seems to be on the gun, and the crystallized arm seems redundant. If I was a villain who had a huge crystal arm, i would definitely use it either as a weapon or to intimidate others. I think he needs to revel in that fear, maybe ready to grasp or crush someone?
amazing!! well done ;)
ReplyDeleteHey Andi, it's going to take a bit of courage and endurance to revisit your villain - but I think you should. Part of the issue is that his crystalised arm - which is the defining feature of him - looks passive - like a total dead-weight, and if it had some animation to it, just something to make it feel as if it belongs to the character more?
ReplyDeleteYes that's what I've been thinking. A bit of animation would do the trick. Thank you Phil :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe more emphasis on the villain as well because you have done a great job with the hero and sidekick but your villain is not quite there enough compared to the other two
ReplyDeleteMaybe a more sinister expression or as Phil suggested more life in the crystalised arm showing off a bit of power
However I think your close just refine the villain further and I think you will have three successful characters
Well done :)
I think the villains pose does need some work. The emphasis seems to be on the gun, and the crystallized arm seems redundant. If I was a villain who had a huge crystal arm, i would definitely use it either as a weapon or to intimidate others. I think he needs to revel in that fear, maybe ready to grasp or crush someone?
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