So.. Everything is cleaner now and with better flow. I am finding the story very cute and clear, the best combination for small children. I changed my main character's name to Theodore (sorry Phil) and got rid of the Princess of the opposite kingdom. I hope it works now :)
Theodore and the Disease Monsters -Treatment 
Theodore is fine - but there's still too much 'telling' in this treatment; go back and thin it out some more; a good tip; don't write in paragraphs - write in pithy, bullet points in which each bullet point must move the story forwards - not keep it still, not repeat info - move it forwards each time.
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